Friday, August 11, 2017

pinic day at tamaki primary

NAME: Maani
Date: 17-3-16

Write about the Picnic Day on Tuesday at TPS

Write about:
  • when and where the event took place
  • who was with you  
  • what you did (think about the order you did things)
  • how you felt and why you felt this way.

Remember to:
  • choose your words carefully
  • write in full sentences
  • take care with your spelling and punctuation
  • give your writing a title if you want to
  • check your work: read it through and fix any mistakes you find.

Start writing here:

This took place at tamaki primary school
My friends were with me and also my brother and my mum and dad
When I went I went to the bouncy castles I was so so so so so hot i kept running back and forth and I was so so so so so so so tired also  

One of the teachers done this picnic day and that is our thankful teacher and her name is miss kelly and she is our principle also when i went with my friend i was saying to my friend teri come  and play with me and then we did when i felt hot i had a headache so that's why i  went home  my friend said hey where are you going i want to play with you can you stay when she said that i said i have to go home and then she cried and i felt so so so so sad so i gave her a huge and she said bye and the bell rang and our parents had to pack up also we had to drop get out of bouncy castle and go to the dots.