Monday, July 2, 2018


Focuses for writing this week
Explanation in my own words.
How to use speech marks
Before your talk and after your talk
How to put in other punctuation
Any punctuation has to go before the speech marks 
When to start a new line or when to keep writing
When 2 or 3 people are talking
Different words for ‘said’
Asked, replied, responded, yelled, screamed, shouted, mumbled, said, muttered, gasped, panting, chuckled, thought, told, uttered, continued, whispered
Adding adverbs
Responded politely, asked politely, screamed angrily,

“Who can I pick on?” asked Miss Ashley.
“Me” replied Timote.

“How was your day?” asked Hope.
“Great, thank you” replied Miss Ashley.

“How was your weekend” asked Dwyane.
“It was good” responded Havea.

If more than one person is talking, you put the reply underneath.
Mary was a beautiful girl who was wearing her long black hair in two plaits. She asked her mum, “can I go to the pools today?”.
“Why do you want to go” mum replied.
“It’s hot and I want to cool off”.
“Fine then”

If it’s only one person, you keep going.
Little red riding hood walked along the dirt path and thought to herself “I’m getting hungry”. She had walked a looooonng way but the thought of warm apple pie when she got to grandma’s house kept her going.

“Hi Maani How’s your day”asked Vina
“Yeah it's been fine How’s yours?” replied Maani
“Oh me too is fine to day” responded  Vina
“What did you do” replied Maani
“Nothing” said Vina

Thursday, June 28, 2018


One marvelous day In a faraway land There was A beautiful girl who was enormously rich who had 6 sons and 6 daughters she was rich because she had 4 jobs .

Friday, June 15, 2018

Tuesday, May 29, 2018

Friday, May 25, 2018

The shiny sun

Title: The shiny sun

Intro: The sun is a shiny  blasting hot fireball the sun has gas which is called the hydrodyne gas .

Location: The sun is located in space  the sun is in the middle

the sun is soured by 8 planet called mercury,venus,
Earth,mars, jupiter,saturn,uranus,neptune these planets are not made out of GAS .

History: Did you know that the sun is really special the sun is not a planet it is a star it is also known as a sol and the sun is special because it gives us heat and energy

What is the sun.?
The sun is a star also known as a huge ball of fiery gas

The 8 planets spin around the sun the get heat and light

Friday, May 18, 2018

Tuesday, May 8, 2018