NAME: Maani
Date: 17-3-16
Write about the Picnic Day on Tuesday at TPS
Write about:
- when and where the event took place
- who was with you
- what you did (think about the order you did things)
- how you felt and why you felt this way.
Remember to:
- choose your words carefully
- write in full sentences
- take care with your spelling and punctuation
- give your writing a title if you want to
- check your work: read it through and fix any mistakes you find.
Start writing here:
This took place at tamaki primary school
My friends were with me and also my brother and my mum and dad
When I went I went to the bouncy castles I was so so so so so hot i kept running back and forth and I was so so so so so so so tired also
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