I am a Year 6 learner at Tamaki Primary School in Auckland, New Zealand. I am in Te Puna Wairua and my teacher is Whaea Lee.
Showing posts with label writing. Show all posts
Showing posts with label writing. Show all posts
Monday, July 23, 2018
miranda hot springs
Monday, July 2, 2018
dialog
Focuses for writing this week
Explanation in my own words.
How to use speech marks
Before your talk and after your talk
How to put in other punctuation
Any punctuation has to go before the speech marks
When to start a new line or when to keep writing
When 2 or 3 people are talking
Different words for ‘said’
Asked, replied, responded, yelled, screamed, shouted, mumbled, said, muttered, gasped, panting, chuckled, thought, told, uttered, continued, whispered
Adding adverbs
Responded politely, asked politely, screamed angrily,
EXAMPLES
“Who can I pick on?” asked Miss Ashley.
“Me” replied Timote.
“How was your day?” asked Hope.
“Great, thank you” replied Miss Ashley.
“How was your weekend” asked Dwyane.
“It was good” responded Havea.
If more than one person is talking, you put the reply underneath.
Mary was a beautiful girl who was wearing her long black hair in two plaits. She asked her mum, “can I go to the pools today?”.
“Why do you want to go” mum replied.
“It’s hot and I want to cool off”.
“Fine then”
If it’s only one person, you keep going.
Little red riding hood walked along the dirt path and thought to herself “I’m getting hungry”. She had walked a looooonng way but the thought of warm apple pie when she got to grandma’s house kept her going.
MY GROUP’S EXAMPLE.
“Hi Maani How’s your day”asked Vina
“Yeah it's been fine How’s yours?” replied Maani
“Oh me too is fine to day” responded Vina
“What did you do” replied Maani
“Nothing” said Vina
Friday, December 8, 2017
trees for survial
Did you know that there are 39 % of grassland in our country . Also there are 23.8 trees in new zealand this data was collected in 2012 . we do not know the % of trees In 2017 but by 2018 there might be more trees we need trees . For shade and oxygen if we had no trees our life would not exists without trees in his earth because they produce most of the oxygen that humans and wildlife breathe. We cut down trees so we can furniture,timber , houses ,and wood we use these items for humans and some trees have fruit and we will have no fruit and the trees are the insects home and if there no trees at all there would be no fresh air and no breeze and we would be sweety.
Friday, May 12, 2017
TASTING DARK CHOCOLATE AND NOT HEALTHY
Today on Friday we had Tasted healthy Chocolate. There were 2 types of Chocolates.There were Dark Chocolate.And a sweet as Dark Chocolate. First we tasted the Dark chocolate. Which” was so tasty. But the second one was a bit yummy. I” liked the dark chocolate one. When we tasted all of them then lydia did. She didn't like the first one because it was a bit yuck.The second one was a bit sweet.And then mrs asked question
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